Ok guyz... I jus wanna say a few things here. I feel like these last few posts have jus been garbage. -_- Dn't disagree with me either cuz then I'll kno u're all liars, lol. Anyway they seem extreeemely boring nd out of place :/ Um... @Trebblebarbie brought up a really good question in her comment, she asked what now? Or sum'n like that. I honestly don't know... I fixed them like u asked me to... But do u see what happens when I give u wut u want? The story gets boriiing! Lol, so from this note on, im gonna try and spice it up ;) I love you guys DEARLY, but im gonna hafta make sum changes. Sublte or major? Idk yet... I wanna know what u guyz r thinking tho. Be honest nd dn't feed me crap. Since Drake's gone, wut do u think I should do now? I only wanna see how u guyz think. I'm not promising to take the story where you want it to go, I jus wanna know where you think it should go. Make sense? I hope so. Btw, I love it when you guyz comment. It doesn't matter how many times u comment on one post/chapter. It doesn't matter how late u comment. I prefer long comments in case u didn't notice. :) But back to the story.... Tell me how u guyz are feeling abt this plz! Idc how u let me kno, on here, thru twitter, email? Jus go for it! I'm not posting crap until I get sum honest opinions from ALL of you. Well half of all of you, lol. Enough of me venting or whatever it is I'm doin :/ Let me kno how u feel. Thank you all so much! Muuuaah!!! <3
i think you should like make drake come and pop up on her. let her do somethings as nicki minaj again. i wana see her working and he pops up during a performance or some cute shit. of course have arguments which will lure him back home and make it juciy around holiday. make one of them have like good/bad dreams all the time. late night calls and phone sex (lol) but just make it h ow you want it. i trust you to make a good as steamy ass crazy ass story. work your magic
ReplyDeleteOmg are you joking? I'm not just saying this, but these last couple chapter have been my favorites, especially the very last one. They were not the least bit boring, they were incredibly sweet! I'm so in love with the way you write them, it's so adorable and I can just imagine the real life versions saying these things. As for what you should s next, I couldn't exactly tell you, but if you wanna spice it up, just PLEASE don't have him cheat on her while he's on tour or anything crazy like that. Just keep doing what you've been doing, it's an amazing story, and I check everyday hoping you've updated. Haha, please post soon!
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ReplyDeleteHEEEEEEEELLLLLOOOO:)!!!!!Lol fuuuuuck this is the 6th time ive tried posting this cuz i WAS on my ipod but it kept accidentally deleting what i was writing so im writing this on the computer now-_- grr...Lol ok SO here we go AGAIN: It's a good thing you like long comments cuz this one is gonna be long as a muhhhfuckaa!!!!First off, i have 2 say that honestly, you have aaaaaamazing writing skills and a great imgaination!! :) Well, i JUST found your blog last night and OHHHHH MAAAAAHH GAAAAHHHH!!!!! Its SOOOOOOO good!! I stayed up til 4 in the mornin until i finished every.single.chapter! I couldnt stop reading it was just toooo gooood!Haha:) But i was upset when i got 2 the last chapter i was like noooo theres nothing else to read!! Seriously i cant waaaait 4 u 2 update us all!xDD I love how you added lots of humor! I know 4 sure that i LOL'd more than like..30 times baahhahhahaha=] Ohhh and also, i was fucking shocked too the MAX when you said you were a virgin i was like NOOO WAAAY!! She has GOTTA be joking!! The sex scenes are SOOO HAWT LOOLL.Good job;) hahaaha. Ok well i have nooo idea where 2 go with the story now that Drake is gone. Hopefully you write sumn juicy?;D Oh and its def a good idea that u keep doing both sides of the story when theyre apart.? Uhhhh..what else...i just dont know !Sorry i can't help like at all with giving you any ideas LOL..but i knowww you'll come up with something good! Post the next chapter..."sooner than later!" and keep up the great work:)
I'm not a LIAR,but I disagree. I suggest that you HUSHHHHH and keep writing! Dammit!
ReplyDeleteI am THIS CLOSE to punching you in the face (; hahaaa. But we are going to speak via email. Enough of this down putting ish! Tuh.
And I'm not giving you long comments...I'm giving you opposite (; [Remember that? Tank top and Sweater? *Dies.*)
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twin dont you go do nothing stupid it has not been garbage!! -___________- but a twist would be nice DONT DO NOTHING MAJOR!!
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ReplyDeleteSO... first awff, eye want sum hardcore sex scenes ya'eard me!
Sex scenes that will make me feel like i'm watching it!
Sex scenes that will make me quiver okay!
And ummm... lmao
I feel like while Drake's gone, sumthin should happen to Nicki (No eye iz naht col' hearted but) I want him to come back [EARLY] and save her from some sort of danger or sum shit otherwise I won't get my scenes!
Buttt for real, u know I love ur story hun
and I personally enjoyed the last few chapters so NEHH *sticks tongue out*
Ok first of all the last few chapters hav been AMAZING!!! I want u to do sum like hard core sex scenes mayb even a pregnancy or marriage proposal??? But other than that just make sumthin happen to where Drake comea bak home early & him & Nicki get it on like real good...mayb sumthin should happen to Drake about his knee getting hurt again or sumthin happening w Nicki which makes Drake have to come home & they can b having those hot & steamy moments. Lol but newayz Post Soon (;
ReplyDeleteOk so 1st things 1st, these pass few chapters haven't been nowhere near boring nor garbage! You don't give yourself enough credit! You're an amazing writer & you should know that otherwise you wouldn't be writing this amazing fic. On the other hand, I understand how you feel, because I've done this very thing with stories I've written that went this direction (where 1 of the characters leaves for a bit) & everybody wants to know what happens next. I say there's plenty of things that can happen next, but for one thing I still wanna know what happened that has Mr. Maraj not liking Safaree! You thought I forgot about that huh? Ohhhh no sweetie I didn't!
ReplyDeleteSo I was thinking, maybe next chapter Nicki can wake up the next morning bored as hell b/c Drakes not there, she can either call Safaree & bother him or decide to make a sudden decision to fly to New York to see her fam just b/c she misses them. Safaree should come too! That way I can find out what the hell happen!
LOL @ everybody wanting sex. Smh A relationship is not all about sex yall..haha but I can't say I don't agree with them, cause I'll be lying if I did. But what I want to see is Nicki & Drake relationship becoming stronger while he's on tour. They say absence makes the heart grow fonder, so I think they should have cute little phone conversation about how they miss each other & all that good stuff. Or even Skype each other, either way, they just really need to work on this whole trust thing, & Drake putting his all into it. Nicki can be working also!
Or just skip them 4 weeks & bring Drake's ass back home..lol Idk. But I hope you can think of something & hopefully what somebody says to you gives you some ideas. I REALLY love this story, this is one of the favs along with "Love Like This" & "It's Still In Your Eyes". Yall 3 are my tops! You're stories are more realistic to me & you ladies actually tell a story instead of having Drake and Nicki have sex all the damn time & she ends up pregnant & whether she'll keep it or lose it..blah blah blah NOT that those stories aren't good, I just get bored with them. Anyways I wish you luck Barb! & I hope to see a new chapter soon :)
I'm not bullshittin I've loved these chptrs the Only thing I didnt lik was them climbin up the ghat damn mountains so yeah but they haven't been boring just sometimes tedious lik to much desribing I think if u give the reader to much info maybe like about wat the environment is lik then it dosent let the readers mind roam as muchas there imagination should hav cuz uve already told them specificly told them wat it looks lik but yeah otherwise it is always great always keeps me interested. There is never really a boring moment in Ur story so yeah and I've always loved Ur stories lik I've said before and im sayin again Ur an amazing writer!!!!!! No bull!!!!
ReplyDeleteOh, I forgot to add something earlier, I really don't think you should put a baby or marriage in the story now, especially not a baby. What I love about your story is how it seems realistic, as if we could see this actually happening, and I mean do you really think dricki would have a baby so soon, it's only been four months! Again I fucking love your story, post soon.
ReplyDeleteYhur storys have ben Amazinq(: Very Far from borinq(: But Since Drake is away! Yhu shud have one of them do somethinq go make the other mad er do somethig that upsets the other maybe a fight nd then mayb a cople days weeeks they make up(: nd it makes their relationship stronger(: But idk(: its up to yhu! But atleast spice it upp!(: but please noo babies er Marriage!
ReplyDeleteSoooo I'm a new reader and i have to say i do really like it. It has taken me FOREVER to find a good Nicki Minaj and Drake Story!! Ok but down to business. I would say don't involve babies or marriage, at least not yet. I would say maybe make it where Nicki had somethings she didn't tell drake. Or like have the media find out.. They've been all in front of her house and the mountain without any paparazzi.. Have some time of award show come up. Make it as realistic as possible and to be honest i'm TOTALLY happy drake did NOT cum inside of her..! Maybe have it where Nicki And SB ..Get photographed being a little touchy feely with each other.! or all of young money on 106th and park. Maybe have it where SB gets really jealous and on the show he puts nicki and drake on the spot. like he would say "So nicki what have you and drake been doing on your breaks? Spend a lot of time together?" ... He doesn't say there going out but he ask's them extremely close questions that can reveal them. Please include amber rose. They are supposedly friends in real life maybe she could be included (Hopefully amber doesnt do anything bad.. i realllllllly like her lol and i dont wanna be mad at her lol) Keep in mind how long they have actually been officially dating only 4 months so i wouldn't do anything majorly lovey dovey... Your story if Fucking amazing!! Message me if you want to ask any questions or need more help.. i'd be happy to!! :) Twitter: @Shawtayye
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I got a really good idea maybe the paps could have been near the mountains or something( don't ask me y the paps were in the mountains their everywhere) and got a pic of them kissing or something then Drake comes back home to nic to protect her cuz now the paps and reporters have gone crazy!!! Then maybe Safaree and nic and drake escape to new york and we finally find out WAT HAPPEND BETWEEN SAFAREE AND ROBERT WERE FIGHTING ABOUT!!!! Ok settling down but yea that's my idea maybe its a good One maybe not. But again I love Ur stories!!!!
ReplyDeleteSorry wher it says WAT HAPPEND BETWEEN ROBERT AND SAFAREE WERE FIGHTING ABOUT its supposed to say WAT HAPPEND BETWEEN SAFAREE AND ROBERT(Mr.Maraj) AND Y R THEY FIGHTING!!!!!
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